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Elex
April 13th, 2018, 1:26 pm
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i need cnc or an other comments on this because i feel like it needs a lot of improving before i finish it

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Exanneon

· April 13th, 2018, 1:29 pm
well first of all it's so fast that my sleepy mind can't keep track, and second of all it's way too fast for my sleepy mind to keep track of, and third of all i wish i had that much energy, and fourth of all it's way too fas- you get the point i think
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Elex

· April 13th, 2018, 1:42 pm
ok
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Txxch

· April 13th, 2018, 2:42 pm
I like the comedy in it, but if it's for dojo duels i recommend putting down the funny sounds and text a lil bit, sometimes some people in the audience dont have a sense of humour, also, yh the speed can slow down a lil bit. Good luck tho
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SuMicAnims

· April 13th, 2018, 2:48 pm
Too fast.
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pixelatedscribbles

· April 13th, 2018, 3:42 pm
Whats the second song called
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Elex

· April 13th, 2018, 3:47 pm
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Elex

· April 13th, 2018, 3:47 pm
fuck
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Elex

· April 13th, 2018, 3:48 pm
@pixelatedscribbles she's a riot by jungle giants
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pixelatedscribbles

· April 13th, 2018, 3:50 pm
Thanks
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JasonTheBoring

· April 13th, 2018, 4:27 pm
lel beard ninja music :}}
it's fast-paced doesnt seem too fast at the start imo, there were prolly a couple of scenes that couldve been made more clear (ex: when dark orange dude is punched, maybe zoom out on him flying away and blue chasing him, and when blue goes to kick light orange show him running towards him more, because theyre still far away so it's weird how he just makes like one leap and he's already next to him, ja feel)
however tho all that changes when black dude comes in. his first scene was pretty sex btw, i liked that. the fight after that tho is pretty too fast like what other dudes said. only thing i can say is the cliche "make scenes longer" schmuck.
another 2 cents suggestion, when you have time maybe try to watch fastpaced animations that have alotta different cuts, like FLLFFL stuff, that one madoka fight with guns, or yutaka nakamura's soul eater cuts. Study them and pay attention to how long each scene goes on enough to convey what is happening without making the pacing too slow or too quick.
hope you finish this broh, it looks neato so far
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JasonTheBoring

· April 13th, 2018, 4:29 pm
*whispers*:(oh yeah and one punch man too)
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Elex

· April 13th, 2018, 4:41 pm
thankies, what is the opm tho
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JasonTheBoring

· April 13th, 2018, 6:54 pm
what is the opm? what do you mean? if you mean what scenes then I think pretty much most of them lol. (go here: https://www.sakugabooru.com/post?tags=o ... +fighting+)
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Denki

· April 14th, 2018, 6:15 am
awesome
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Crystalanims

· April 15th, 2018, 9:46 pm
daym this is good
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The_Guardian

· July 3rd, 2018, 10:07 pm
oh you actually doing our ffa lol
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The_Guardian

· July 3rd, 2018, 10:07 pm
and it is a brush, not a fucking mop or a torch xDD
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