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EntityUnknown
September 16th, 2018, 1:01 am
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sorry for my consistent inactivity i just got hit w school and sickness and also im doin some stuff for alan becker

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Kayal

· September 16th, 2018, 1:10 am
oh ur doing stuff for him now?
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EntityUnknown

· September 16th, 2018, 1:20 am
yeah but what about the animation eh
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Kayal

· September 16th, 2018, 1:28 am
lol it looks great as always anyway, didn't even realize i was going off topic
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acb

· September 16th, 2018, 8:51 am
i think your animation should know what it wants as much as it can, it shouldn't be confusing to the viewer what
it wants to show intentionally, everything should look "intentional". the only thing i can see that is
the most plausible thing to be called "intentional" is the focus on the movement having good physics/motion
which id say you did a fairly decent job at but if that's all your animation has to offer then that's kinda boring and easily forgettable, having good motion is good but having good motion with a sense of direction is way better, miles better. that's one of the reasons why id say char acting is so important to animation
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acb

· September 16th, 2018, 9:00 am
the stickmen dont even have heads, do you know how much i hate that? its so lazy, it tells me you dont even care enough to put heads on it and make your work presentable, or that you think the movement is that good by itself it doesnt need something as important as one of the main focal points in the anim.
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Septagon

· September 16th, 2018, 12:37 pm
I agree with acb for the most part. Good direction with bad animation can still get the point across, good animation with bad direction is confusing and forgettable. The beginning was good but the last few seconds took me several rewatches. One thing i don't think is that bad is the missing heads. Like yeah if this is supposed to be a finished animation then add goddamn heads, but for practice it really doesn't matter. They're not super hard to animate and only give subtility to the motions instead of the full range like limbs do.
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acb

· September 16th, 2018, 2:00 pm
just for the sake of presentation i dont like it enough to leave the heads out, theyre just stickmen >:///
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