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Septagon
May 2nd, 2018, 4:37 pm

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ChiefDestiny

· May 2nd, 2018, 6:21 pm
Its great! but I think the head head is too big for its body. But its still good: D
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Septagon

· May 2nd, 2018, 6:25 pm
Yeah it's supposed to be in perspective (head much more forward than the legs) but didn't quite get it right
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Spreckops

· May 2nd, 2018, 6:46 pm
Maybe have them leaning in a bit more? to enhance the fact she's reaching out.
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Dapstart

· May 2nd, 2018, 7:21 pm
i love this, only real criticism is that the thumb on the POV hand looks like it's bending the wrong way :P
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Dapstart

· May 2nd, 2018, 7:22 pm
i love how you did the hair, and tilted the horizon and whatnot.
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Septagon

· May 2nd, 2018, 7:45 pm
Oh damn you're right didn't even notice that
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EbonyAndIvory

· May 3rd, 2018, 7:14 am
This is decent, but At this point, I really suggest you do some art studies, starting with em basics like line!, shape, and form. For you in particular, it’ll take a week or two. Then study dem figures m8. ‘Cause the hand and the figure seems a bit broken and out of proportion. You’ve seemed to have been improving though, so keep it up.
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Septagon

· May 3rd, 2018, 7:36 am
I'm actually doing that right now, and when a sketch looks decent i color/shade it like this one. You're right tho that i should probably keep it simple for a while, like for exmple as i said above the head is supposed to be big since it's closer to the camera as the legs, but you don't really see that on this picture, the body looks flat other than the arms.
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EbonyAndIvory

· May 3rd, 2018, 9:16 am
I don’t usually like to say this due to being bashed on (but Ima grow a pair) but learning basic shapes would help you out in terms of perspective and position in space. Boxes, cylinders, and spheres. Maybe look into those if you want.
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Septagon

· May 3rd, 2018, 10:31 am
Sure good idea! I think i did enough boxes (look at the background) but i can try some other stuff too. I like drawing geometry
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VinnyBruh

· May 3rd, 2018, 11:38 am
I think its amazing
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Metachion

· May 3rd, 2018, 10:51 pm
ebony gay tbh. work on proportions and foreshortening,
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Metachion

· May 3rd, 2018, 10:52 pm
there are too many errors proportionwise to list in a timely fashion but if you want I can go over some main ones
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Septagon

· May 4th, 2018, 5:33 am
Yes sure, as long as you take into consideriation what i said above on why the head is bigger than the legs
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EbonyAndIvory

· May 4th, 2018, 7:02 am
No u
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Vivify

· May 4th, 2018, 8:18 pm
You're pulling a FranLoL
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JBrownieboy

· May 5th, 2018, 11:09 pm
Dood this could be one big writing inspiration its awesome
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